Posted by Mrs.K
4 commentsIf I were a Plane
I’d comfort those who’d be with me
Spread my wings
And soar through life
During important times I’d hover
During unimportant times
I’d fly by
Sometimes I’d be in
A cloudy mood, But I’d always
Make it to blue skies
My tail and wings
Would comfort me
When things got bumpy
When I feel gray
I get away and go
Up…
Up…
Up…
Shira, this is a very nice poem that made me envision being on a plane. I found myself wondering what it would be like to travel “Air Shira”!
I really like this poem, Shira! I like the first part – ” If I were a plane I’d comfort those who’d be with me”
You are a great poet! Great job 
Shira, this poem is very interesting and I really enjoyed reading it!
Shira, you did a great job! You expressed feelings and gave a new perspective toward airplanes. You really used your imagination in this poem. @shaina and sarita I agree <3 this poem, Shira! Great job!
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